Friday, July 27, 2012

Torn Paper


4 comments:

  1. I love being drawn into a story, able to feel what the character is feeling. This is one of my favorites.

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  2. Oh I hope she finds him! Nice evocative piece.

    Welcome to Friday Flash ^_^

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  3. Very nicely crafted. The story elicits sadness and a sense of loss, yet at the same time has the underlying sense of hope, and feelings of things that may be repaired and put right.

    Will you be expanding on this? The story just begs to be given closure. :)

    Welcome to #fridayflash. :)

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  4. I have been swept away in your world and really want to know more! Great emotional feeling within this piece!

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